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Poetry
A group to share your own poetry and both modern and ancient poetry that you enjoy
Tanka Poetry
Tanka poems follow a set of rules. They all have five lines and each line follows a pattern: the first line has five syllables, the second line has seven syllables, the third line has five syllables, the fourth line has seven syllables, and the fifth line has seven syllables
What is a Japanese tanka?
The tanka is a thirty-one-syllable poem, traditionally written in a single unbroken line. A form of "waka", Japanese song or verse, tanka translates as “short song,” and is better known in its five-line, 5/7/5/7/7 syllable count form.
image "long feather" ~ Julie
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Magpie lost his softened wing
long feather is found ~ syllable count ~ 5
magpie lost his softened wing ~ syllable count ~ 7
air currents hold tight ~ syllable count ~ 5
treasure lifted in safety ~ syllable count ~ 7
flying the perfected sound ~ syllable count ~ 7
magpie lost his softened wing ~ syllable count ~ 7
air currents hold tight ~ syllable count ~ 5
treasure lifted in safety ~ syllable count ~ 7
flying the perfected sound ~ syllable count ~ 7
Julie
edited Nov 2023
Ametrine -(MHZ)
Thank you, Julie :o)
Feb 6